半个月亮

夜落上海。
模糊内廓线,
俞扩俞分明。
明月惹星稀,
星稀因霓彩。
彩晕掩尘埃,
尘埃变下土。
上海夜落。
 

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3 Responses to 半个月亮

  1. says:

    有趣……但终究是打油诗……(才女之类的奉承话就不说了吧……)

  2. says:

         灵:
            寂静的夜,
            天上的月,
            水中的倒影,
            仿佛一切都在等待着什么?
            清风浮过空灵的大地,
            忽然踏来春天的脚步;
            月虽未满,
            却依然美丽;
            人为相思,悠然情义!
            月因月而明,
            心因思而静^_^
             

  3. Jiahui says:

    这应该叫现代诗~
    前几句角度独特,关系也很明朗,但是最后的二、三句作何解?

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